Transfer Essay

<p>Could someone read over my transfer essay for the common application?</p>

<p>I'm not sure if I get the objectives, so I would really appreciate some feedback. Thanks!</p>

<p>redribbon, i will swap with you, if you'd like. PM me please</p>

<p>PM me. I'll take a look.</p>

<p>PM me if you want to.</p>

<p>PM me i'll edit it</p>

<p>PM me if you would like</p>

<p>PM, I will be harsh and honest so just expect a lot of feedback.</p>

<p>You can PM me :)</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read</p>

<p>I’d love to read it too, I’m also a transfer. PM me?</p>