<p>I'm looking for a few readers. The essay is a tad long and I'm trying to cut it down, but there is one section in particular that I need some help with. The way it looks now, I'm bashing my current university, but it is what I want to say. I just need to reform some of my statements in an attempt to talk about my current university in a much brighter light while still conveying that it isn't for me. </p>
<p>PM me or comment here if you're interested :).</p>