<p>Soooooo here we go:</p>
<p>I'm a 22 (will be 23 in July '10), white female of Eastern European origin. I moved from Ukraine almost 3 years ago by myself (I was 19 at that time). I come from an educated family of engineers and educators, but not very rich meaning I haven't received any financial assistance from my mom since I've moved to the US (she's a single mom, and I was adopted when I was 7 days old). </p>
<p>I learned English back in my home country, have an AA from an accredited university back home as well. I don't want to settle for less than the best education, and I'm going to do everything to achieve my goal. I work 40-50 hr weeks as a production manager for a home remodeling company while taking 12-14 units at a community college. This is insane to begin with, so I don't really have many volunteering hours (8 from domestic violence help organization for women, a few from a dog shelter, 8 from a community charity event, that's about it...thinking about applying myself at the Culver City Police Station as a part-time volunteer (probably a few hours on weekends).</p>
<p>Transferable GPA 4.0 (40 units so far, applying for transfer admission for 2011), completed the Honors Transfer program (took 8 honors classes when only 6 was really needed). Almost done with IGETC, just need the foreign language class, PE and a few more to get to 60 units. That stuff was initially done for UC Berkeley, but now I'm seriously aiming for 2 Ivies as well - Cornell and Brown. Brown requires SAT, I don't think I will do very well because of the variations in my non-American secondary and high-school education. I'll try though, what do I have to lose? The app fee, that's all :)</p>
<p>As I already mentioned above, I don't have many volunteering hours and don't think I will be able to get hundreds (or thousands, like some people do with more leisure time) considering my tight work/school schedule. I work Mon-Fri 9-5:30 at the office, attend night classes 2-3 days a week, have lots of homework both in-class and online, work overtime on weekends (helping arranging trade shows for the company because I need more money). I can't give up my full-time job to volunteer, and a part time job will not pay my bills) It will be quite upsetting if they deny my application simply because they'll think I don't ever want to help the community.
I'm not sure what they will think about my story, I'm not planning on whining how hard it is to work overtime and go to school full-time, I just want to show how determined I am.</p>
<p>Is there anything I can do/change to increase my chances to be admitted? </p>
<p>Please, suggest how to better construct my personal statement, or what else I can do to make up for the community service.</p>
<p>Thanks a lot in advance!</p>