Tried to use humor in my Stanford roommate letter, did it come out like I hoped??

College Essays
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<p>Is anybody willing to read my Stanford roommate letter...its very short....tried to make it funny, hope it pans out lol</p>

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<p>I'm an 09er, but I'm not applying to Stanford.</p>

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<p>Thanks, anyone else?</p>

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<p>no stanford for me, feel free to send it</p>

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<p>I'm applying to ol' Stanford as well, but I've finished (or at least I think so...) my roommate letter, 1800chars precisely! :P</p>

<p>I can swap with you, if you want. I'm not really sure if I have humor in mine (I probably sound like an old dork). I really need to hear one more opinion on mine.</p>

<p>PM me for phun.</p>

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<p>I'm an '09er, but i'll gladly take a look at it.</p>

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<p>send it to me and i'll read it over</p>

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<p>I'll take a look. I was going for humour on my common app essay as well.</p>

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<p>i can take a look...send it over and ill edit and critique :D</p>

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<p>PM me; I'll look at it conceptually.</p>

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<p>I'm an 09-er but not a Stanford-er so PM me if you want another reader :)</p>