<p>So my essay is two paragraphs as dictated by the application, but Im worried it may be a little long after reading some samples and other's essays they posted. Its just over 700 words, and with 1" margins is one page, but theres not room for another word. </p>
<p>I feel like the paragraphs are coherant and dont ramble, and the essay is pretty entertaining to read. Is the length too long regardless, and should I shorten it up, or do you think its fine as long as it isnt repetitive and boring?</p>