<p>I'm applying to colleges this fall and having a hard time deciding which of two possible topics I should write about for the CommonApp.</p>
<p>The first one I'm considering is an essay about how I was conflicted about whether or not to reveal that I was an atheist to my Catholic family. I think that this would possibly be more personal, as it would be written as a narrative. This might also reveal something about my personality. On the other hand, I think it would be risky to reveal my personal beliefs.</p>
<p>The second possibility would be an essay about why and how I am passionate about philosophy. This might be a little more cliche, but it would give me the opportunity to discuss my intellectual interests and demonstrate my knowledge of and passion for the subject.</p>
<p>I have a fairly good idea of what I would write for each essay, but I can't tell if either of these topics has the potential to be interesting, original, and personal.</p>
<p>I wouldn’t recommend writing the first one because religion is always a risky topic for a personal statement essay although it does sound interesting.
I recommend the second option. Just try to make it sound less cliche.</p>
<p>I actually recommend the first one. However, I strongly believe you should pick the topic you connect most with. Colleges are looking for your personality to shine though on your essay. So whichever essay best shows who you are, you should write. The first essay topic, be sure not to delve into the actual theology aspect. Write it to show how overcoming this obstacle taught you something or defined who you are. The second essay topic, be sure to connect your love of philosophy to something relatable, such as a memory.</p>
<p>I also recommend the second one. The first essay could be a sensitive topic for some, and you really don’t know what kind of person is reading your essay.</p>
<p>Remember, it’s not a hs essay, where you take a stand and defend it. Or show your intellect. And, it’s not about coming off as smart or sure. It should be a friendly tale that shows the strengths you have that they want in their freshman class. </p>
<p>Whatever you pick, remember “show, not tell.” Many kids who write on either of your choices tend to do a lot of telling/explaining. Find a way to engage the readers.</p>