Tulane and Common App essays: Please help!!

<p>If someone would please look at them for content and grammar that'd be awesome. My biggest weakness for college apps is my essays, so any advice is appreciated. If you can edit them then please tell me and I'll pm you. </p>

<p>If you look at my 2 essays and would like me to review yours too then I definitely will. I'm a grammar freak so I can edit for grammar, but I can look at content too. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>