Two common app essays

<p>Finally finished my first drafts! Would anyone be willing to give either (or both ;]) a read, please? I'll read your essays back. THANK YOU!</p>

<p>sure, send me one of them!</p>

<p>Thank you! I’ll PM it to you :)</p>

<p>sorry, my inbox was full. try again.</p>

<p>b u m p</p>

<p>bumppppppp</p>

<p>ill take a read.</p>

<p>Sure, send both. I’ll read.</p>

<p>You can send both to me if you like. PM.</p>

<p>I can read them. PM me…</p>

<p>pm, I am entering junior at GW, so no worries about copycats</p>

<p>I’ll read both, nothing better to do. PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll read both! I’m a transfer, so I’ve had quite my fair share of writing essays.</p>

<p>Thanks everyone! I just logged on and got all your requests so I’ll PM the reliable sources now lol. Any other takers would be much appreciated! Preferably with 150+ posts, no hard feelings :p</p>

<p>bumpbumpbump.</p>

<p>if you don’t mind, I’ll take a read too and try my best giving you advices</p>

<p>I’ll read them and give comments.</p>

<p>Thank you guys ! :D</p>

<p>Thanks for everyone’s help so far :slight_smile:
With all your advice, my essay(s) are improving greatly! But I’d still love a few more reads before I email it to my AP Lit teacher for our summer assignment due Friday.</p>

<p>So bump!</p>

<p>PM me…I would be happy to comment</p>