<p>Can any of you guys read my two short supplemental essays for UVA? They're both really original and kinda weird, so I dunno if I'm risking a lot to write this kinda stuff.</p>
<p>They should be "a half page or roughly 250 words", but I ended up with 268 and 276. Is that okay?</p>
<p>I'm pretty sure that's fine, but if you can cut down, go for it. Especially the latter one, with 276 words.</p>
<p>Ok now both of them are about 270 words, and I really dunno what to take out. Can any of you read them and critique them?</p>
<p>I will, if you like. Be warned, I'm an 09er - though I'm not applying to UVA. :)</p>
<p>^That's ok with me.</p>
<p>Any other takers? Kinda urgent since I've got less than 8 hours to submit it.</p>
<p>i can read them, if you're still editing.</p>