<p>Hey...I have an essay I was quite satisfied with when I sent it out to Stanford, but last night I wrote an adapted version of it. Right now, I like the new version better, as it seems to flow more easily compared to the original, but I can't decide. Anyone willing to read both and critique them?</p>
<p>I promise you it is unique...and hopefully you will find it most intriguing. :)</p>