<p>thank you !</p>
<p>can I take a look at your essay ?</p>
<p>Can I read it? I'm sure i can give you suggestions</p>
<p>sounds good</p>
<p>I would have no problem with giving suggestions; my best friend is currently applying to schools to I am reading essays like a mad woman right now.</p>
<p>ill read whatever you have</p>
<p>i would like to read and possibly give suggestions if i could</p>