U Mich Supp Essay #2

College Essays
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<p>Can somebody look over and critique my response to Univ. of Michigan supplement essay #2 the prompt is
Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it</p>

<p>Any help would be appreciated </p>

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<p>anything?</p>

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<p>Yeah, sure. Send it to me via PM</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll help, just PM it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read. </p>

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<p>Sure. I definitely advise you NOT to send this to users who are also applying this year.</p>