UA KEYS Program, Read My Essay?

<p>Hello, I am a junior in high school and am planning on going to college for science. Science is one of the things that I am most passionate about and am involved in most scientific extracurriculars offered in Tucson. I am applying to a summer internship at the University of Arizona called KEYS. A letter of interest is required and I was wondering if maybe anyone can give it a read and critique it? THANK YOU</p>