UC Appeal Letter Help!?

Applying to College
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<p>I'm currently writing a appeal letter to several UCs, but I'm not sure if I'm doing it right. I have no clue as to how to start it off (how do I introduce myself?!). </p>

<p>This is my extremely rough draft and I have the majority of the letter done, but was wondering if there'd be anyone who can read it and give me some feedback.</p>

<p>Any kind of feedback --grammar, word choice, style, story, tone, anythinggg would be wonderful!</p>

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<p>Have you figured out why you didn't get accepted to these schools. Knowing that will be important in formulating a strategy.</p>

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<p>It's basically because my GPA were really low during 10th/11th grade. My SAT scores are average/above average for the schools I'm appealing for. My GPA is to blame. </p>

<p>I explained as to why they were so low in the letter.</p>