UC APPS- One really good essay, one not so great.

Applying to College
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<p>What would the UC admissions officers think if an applicant submitted one really well written personal statement while the second statement wasn't so great? </p>

<p>I feel like I answered the first prompt really well, but I struggled a little more with the second one. I guess it's because I feel so strongly about the first one, and no so much the second.. I'm going to have a couple of people go over the second one before I submit it, in hopes that I'll be able to somehow improve it with their critique. </p>

<p>The essays are 100% my own, but I feel a little paranoid that the quality of work between the two essays differ greatly enough to lead the officers into thinking that someone else wrote it. /:</p>

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<p>I totally know how you feel, one prompt gets me all excited and then the second one just bums me out. You could relate a topic in the second one back to the first one if you are concerned about officers thinking someone else wrote it, but I wouldn’t stress too much over that (you’re just over thinking).</p>