Decision: Accepted College of Letters and Science[/size]
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2290; 770 math, 760 reading, 760 writing
ACT (breakdown): never took
SAT II: 800 math, 710 literature (I’m so depressed by this score)
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.95
UC GPA: Flawless UC GPA I can’t remember I think it was 4.3?
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): My school does not rank but I am in the top 3
AP (place score in parenthesis):
IB (place score in parenthesis): 6 in calculus, 6 in computer science
Senior Year Course Load: full IB
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): national merit commended, national honors society, a couple others nothing impressive
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
Practicing Aikido for 11 years, 3 years at the original dojo in Japan, teacher for 2 years
Soccer for 10 years, played at premier level (highest in my state) for 3 years won multiple tournaments
Varsity Soccer for 3 years JV for 1 year
Knowledge Bowl (President) placed 3rd in state
Volunteer at Swedish Hospital on PCU floor for a year
Tutor at my school for struggling students for past year
Played Piano recreationally (no amazing awards) for 8 years, I just play for fun
Overall, around 400 hours of community service from teaching Aikido, tutoring, volunteering at the hospital, etc.
Job/Work Experience: Refereeing youth soccer games for a year
Volunteer/Community service: over 400 hours
Summer Activities: Microsoft high school camp
Essays: Common App: 8.5/10 UC supplement: 9/10
Teacher Recommendation: Did not see either, suspecting they are good probably 8/10
Counselor Rec: Very good 9/10
Additional Rec: Excellent, written by my aikido instructor for the past 7 years 10/10
Other:
I am also doing a research project on cryptography under a mathematics professor who got his B.A. from UPenn and a PhD at University of Washington. It is very intensive and I mentioned it in my Wharton supplemental essay. I think both of my essays are somewhere between good and excellent. I talked about my transformation from when I first started Aikido when I was in 1st grade to how I teach now.
Applied for Financial Aid?: Nope
Intended Major: Finance
State (if domestic applicant): Washington
Country (if international applicant): United States Citizen!
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: 400k+
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): none
Reflection: I am very happy I have been admitted to Berkeley. Tomorrow is the big ivy day for me. I will attend Berkeley if I am not accepted to Harvard, UPenn, or Brown.
Strengths: Strong overall. Solid SAT and GPA, rigorous curriculum, and good ECs. I think my teaching experience in Aikido was unique.
What you tried to focus on in your application - any hooks you tried to make for yourself: I focused heavily on my teaching experience in Aikido and my research project in cryptography.
Weaknesses: My ethnicity.
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/deferred/rejected: See Strengths.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/deferred/rejected:
Accepted: University of Washington, UCLA, SMU
Waitlisted: Northwestern, Washington University in St. Louis
Deferred: UPenn (Wharton)
Waiting: Harvard, UPenn (Wharton), Brown
The most unique thing in your application: I think my Aikido experience coupled with my Japanese international exposure was very unique.