<p>Hello peoples of college confidential. I am very confused about what the content of the Personal Statements should revolve around. Currently, I have a high chance of getting in (ELC at a very competitive school, high SAT, etc) and I don't want to screw up my application with my personal statements. I've heard from sources that Berkeley, specifically, wants you to answer all parts of the question in an informative manner (less eloquence, more answer). My essays at this point tell a lot about me, but miss answering parts of the questions. Should I just stick with that or draft a more conservative alternative?
-Multiple thanks</p>
<p>I’ve actually read and heard that you aren’t supposed to feel as if you need to answer EVERY part of the question. Like if it asks to “describe the world you come from–for example, your family, school, or community”, you aren’t advised to explicitly go into three different sections and talk about your family AND school AND community. The questions are very broad because they expect varied answers and perspectives. The most important thing is that they get to know you, and that the essay essentially “completes” your application.</p>
<p>Okay. Thanks. That sounds kinda admissions officery but I get exactly what you mean. That was the answer I was hoping for. Thanks again</p>