UC / Columbia Personal Statement

College Essays
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<p>Hey, I'm not really sure if my personal statement is ... well, deep enough for Columbia or the UCs. I feel kinda juvenile now, after I wrote it and see all these other people talking about all these high reaching topics, like competition being a negative, and racism, and so many seemingly worldly topics while my essay is solely secular.</p>

<p>The prompt is basically tell us about a moment that has changed your life, and tell us how.</p>

<p>Any reads? <500 words</p>

<p>Please and thank you.</p>

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<p>I can read it! Ill give some insight, as I have experience with the UC prompts.</p>

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<p>Thanks a bunch, anyone else?</p>

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<p>i'm an 08er, i'll be willing to offer critique if you want me to, pm it to me</p>

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<p>PM me... I'll read it.</p>

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<p>Any others?</p>

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<p>Alguien? Then bump.</p>

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<p>Anybody willing to read? Please?</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll take a look. Send it over.</p>

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<p>Send it over!!</p>

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<p>pm or email: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="not%20an%2009-er">/email</a></p>

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<p>I don't mind helping.</p>

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<p>I'm happy to read it if you want, but I'm an '09er but my essays are already written and pretty particular to my situation... (US citizen living abroad)</p>

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<p>Sure, I'd love to read it... and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>

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<p>i can take a look at it if you want!</p>

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<p>i'll read :D
pm me</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me :)</p>

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<p>I will critique it</p>

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<p>hit me with a pm, i'll read it.</p>