UC critique/ proof

<p>thanks anyone interested?</p>

<p>Only my response to second prompt.</p>

<p>Word count 400</p>

<p>sure pm it to me</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>i'll read it pm me</p>

<p>PM's sent </p>

<p>thanks</p>

<p>if possibly you could pm me your essay so i can get an idea of what others are writing</p>

<p>I'll read it. PM me.</p>

<p>PM's sent</p>

<p>thanks all</p>

<p>sounds creative pm it</p>