UC essay #1 - some serious editing needed

<p>First off, I've already written and polished my prompt #2, which measured off to be around 680 words.</p>

<p>Prompt #1 is kind of hard for me, so I wrote two essays in response to that one. One of which detailed my way of visualizing the world (leaning toward applied sciences), and the other leans toward my interest in my culture (Asian American, interested in East Asian and pop culture). Both are quite generic, I know, and it's difficult to choose which one.</p>

<p>Anyway, if you want to read them, feel free to pm me, preferably no high schoolers though. :)</p>

<p>Oh, and I'm applying to Cal and LA with focuses on engineering, out of state.</p>

<p>Much thanks!</p>