UC ESSAY #2...I just want an opinion!

College Essays
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<p>Does anyone want to check over my essay. (220 words). I would prefer someone who is alredy in the uc program, but i'll take anyone. Please help!!! thanx.</p>

<p>i'll pm you.</p>

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<p>no takers!?!?! c'mon.</p>

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<p>pm me i can help...</p>

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<p>i can help</p>

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<p>ditto, pm me</p>

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<p>i can help. PM me</p>

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<p>Send me an email at <a href="mailto:moyeenkhan@yahoo.com">moyeenkhan@yahoo.com</a>. I will pass on my comments</p>

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<p>I'll help as best as I can.</p>

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<p>I can help too!</p>

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<p>alrighty!!! Pm me!!</p>

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<p>I wouldn't mind, PM me :)</p>

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<p>pm it to me.i'll read it.</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>

<p>PM me it</p>

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<p>pm it to me calvin.</p>

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<p>sure Ill take a look, pm me.</p>

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<p>i'll read it too</p>