<p>Would that be ok?</p>
<p>Take it to your English teacher and ask him/her to help you cut 80 words.</p>
<p>The UC application fits 1,100 words. I've taken advantage of that. :]</p>
<p>Maybe it fits 1,100 words so they can see who is able to follow directions. And who is not.</p>
<p>Just cut out some words. Seriously if you take out about 70 words that's like a couple sentences. Not too hard.</p>
<p>Remember if you have 1070 that's fine.</p>
<p>I'm sure it's fine, but try to trim it down a little bit. If you use two adjectives to describe things only use one.
If you go through I'm sure you'll be able to find some unnecessary words.</p>