UC essay anyone want to edit

<p>prompt:
"Describe the world you come from- your family, community or school- and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations."</p>

<p>hurry I need someone to edit it!
greatly appreciated.
admission counselors/ college counselors/ English teachers!</p>

<p>ill help... pm me</p>

<p>ill look at it if u want</p>

<p>pm me, ill look at it</p>

<p>would be glad to . pm it over</p>

<p>sure pm or email <a href="mailto:monmonx24@msn.com">monmonx24@msn.com</a></p>

<p>i can read it too...pm it</p>

<p>pm me too :) ill read!</p>

<p>pm me too. may i see? may i view?</p>