UC essay Critique

<p>Hello,</p>

<p>Can someone please read my uc essays, and tell me any edits he/she feels should be made.</p>

<p>Also, let me know how unique you think my response is, and how accurately it answers the question.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>BUMP BUMP
BUMP IT UP!</p>

<p>And I promise they are at least somewhat interesting/not overly used topics.</p>

<p>I’ll read!</p>

<p>Sent from my SGH-T989 using CC</p>

<p>Sure, copy and paste it in a PM and send it to me.</p>

<p>Alright, sending it now.</p>

<p>And thanks</p>

<p>Still haven’t received your PM.</p>

<p>Sorry, I was just trying to make it easier to read and find any grammar/vocab errors.</p>

<p>OperationIvy did you receive the message?</p>

<p>i wouldnt mind reading it and making corrections i have been giving feedback to my friends and they all like what i said</p>

<p>Yes, I got it. I’m almost done with my notes about your essays.</p>