UC Essay Critique

<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>I'm a new member to CC. I've used it for a while now to read information and to get questions answered, but I finally cracked down and got an account.</p>

<p>I just finished my essay for the UC Personal Statement #1. Can anyone critique it / give feedback? I'll PM those interested.</p>

<p>Thanks so much!</p>

<p>I’ll do it, but could you email me it? You can email me directly through CC by clicking on my account name. </p>

<p>Could you also read my UC essay in return?</p>

<p>Hey can you ready my personal statement as well? I wouldn’t mind taking a look at yours in return</p>