UC Essay Critiques needed right now

College Essays
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<p>Anyone have time to read my UC essays right now? I really want some feedback right now so I can send in my application as soon as possible (little worried about the website crashing on me tomorrow).</p>

<p>So if anyone is willing to read, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks! :) I'll PM anyone who is interested.</p>

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<p>Sorry to bump this thread, but I really need the help. :/</p>

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<p>yeah sure i'll read them. i already submitted mine</p>

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<p>sure send me yours</p>

<p>im willing to trade essays if my posts dont look satisfactory</p>

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<p>I'd love to read yours, could we switch essays so you could read mine too?</p>