UC Essay? Desperate need for help!

<p>So my essay for topic #2 was already 720 words and pretty good (at least I think so) so I don't want to change it.</p>

<p>However, I'm having problems with prompt # 1 </p>

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. *</p>

<p>Please post or message me if you don't mind reading through it and giving some advice. I'm going crazy here with only 2 days left till deadline.</p>

<p>hey dude. iam applying there too. Yeah. the 2nd is easier.
but i dunt have problem with the 1st c0z i am from Vietnam, and pretty i have lots of stuff to talk about. </p>

<p>Just think more about ur origins. or ur environment and stuff.</p>

<p>BTw, do u kn0w whether UC schools accept fee-waiver for the applciaiton? Or we have to pay $70??</p>

<p>well my essay is about my grandmother who has alzheimer's and how that has made me want ot major in biology, medicine, etc. </p>

<p>Not sure about the fee-waiver thing,</p>