UC essay feedback

<p>Was wondering if anyone is willing to read my personal statement and give me a feed back on how it was written. Readers don't have to edit it seeing as how the UC due dates have passed. I just want an opinion.</p>

<p>I’ll read it, PM me!</p>

<p>I’ll read it too.</p>

<p>Sent to you guys</p>

<p>I will help if I can. pm me</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it too.</p>

<p>id love to read it. pm me</p>