uc essay help please

[rolo]

<p>would someone please correct my UC essay. Id really appreciate it.</p>

[anurodh]

<p>i'll help you
pm me</p>

[movieburner125]

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

[CalTech04]

<p>Ill Read It</p>

[mofom4n]

<p>PM it to me, and ill try to help if i can.</p>