I have finished a few of the UC essay prompts and would like a second opinion on them. Is there anyone who is very well-versed in college admissions, namely admissions essays, that could read mine and tell me what they think? I may ask for your opinion on essays I right for other schools as well. Please reply or message me if you’re willing! Thanks.
Make sure you check your spelling. Write, not right. 
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