UC Essay Help

College Essays
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<p>I'm going to be honest with you guys. I can write research papers decently enough. I know the rules of English. However, writing personal essays is a challenge for me. Mine just don't have the qualities that draw readers into the text itself. Anyone willing to help me out? I'm willing to tell you a little bit about myself so that maybe we could brainstorm some essay ideas.</p>

<p>Btw, I would really want to go to UCLA or Berkeley. I have a 3.8 GPA unweighted and a SAT score of 2080 with a decent amount of EC. I think I could get into other UCs with a standard essay but LA and Berkeley might be a little harder to get into and a good essay can be just the right thing to get me in.</p>

<p>So, anyone willing to help me out?</p>

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<p>OH and I have a question, do I have to write 2 seperate essays for the 2 prompts or do I just need to reply to both the prompts in one essay.</p>

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<p>You need to write separate essays. One for each prompt. I would love to help you brainstorm and it would be really great if you could help me out with that too :)</p>

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<p>im applying to UC too!
send em to me, and ill read em</p>

<p>(im actually the opposite.. i do decent on personal essays, but horrible on research papers... cuz i put too much personal views into them.. ahaha)</p>