<p>Hey. Please review one of my essays i wrote in response to prompt 1 of the UC personal statements.</p>
<p>Idk if its too unoriginal.</p>
<p>Please! Thanks, ill message it to whoever can help</p>
<p>Ill take a look if you want</p>
<p>thank you, i send it to you private message</p>
<p>you can message it to me, i will go through it</p>