UC Essay Prompt #1 2011 Feedback

Colleges & Universities A-Z University of California - Berkeley
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<p>Hi, would anyone that is already attending college like to give me feedback on my UC essay? UCB, UCLA, and UCSD are my top UCs. Please comment and I'll privately message you my essay. Please please please. This would mean a lot to me. Thanks!</p>

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<p>10char bump ):</p>

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<p>sure PM me</p>

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<p>Sure PM me</p>