<p>Hey,</p>
<p>Is anyone willing to read my UC essay that is due soon? I need critiques on it, since it still needs improvement.</p>
<p>@noratoledo: Wow. 9 posts from 10:47 to 11:15 in multiple forums, all saying the same thing. I guess the graduate program isn’t working out too well if you have to be a shill for essay services (unless, of course, they are your services). If that’s the case, I suggest that you fire your marketing director.</p>
<p>I can look at it.</p>