UC essay

<p>Hi! I have a rough draft essay for the question: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are? </p>

<p>Im wondering if anyone would like to read it and give me some advice on what to improve</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>PM me if you want to read it</p>