UC Essay

<p>After a much needed revision, I finally completed my UC essay. Does anyone want to read it? I'm not looking for someone to edit or change it in anyway, but I would just like some feedback: this is trash or this good.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>Yes, I'll take a look pm me</p>

<p>Thanks (10 char).</p>

<p>Me too! (10)</p>