UC Essays Critique Request

College Essays
1

<p>I figure I would throw this out there for those who may be interested in reading my essays. </p>

<p>Prompt #1 is roughly 250 words and prompt #2 is roughly 750 words.</p>

<p>Will be sending this essay to UCLA/USC and applying as a transfer student; aero/mech engineering major.</p>

<p>Post here if you are interested and I will either PM or e-mail it to you.</p>

<p>I am open to all critiques, so feel free to comment with whatever you think about it.</p>

<p>thanks.</p>

<p>-Don</p>

2

<p>i can try to give you some feedback. PM me</p>

3

<p>PMs sent out to all of those who requested it.</p>

<p>thanks.</p>

<p>-Don</p>

4

<p>I'm class of '08 but finished with my UC app already. PM and I can give it a look :)</p>