UC essays

College Essays
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<p>Hi, I finished my "UC Essay #1" essay. The prompt was: "Describe the world you come from and tell us how you world has shaped your dreams and aspirations."</p>

<p>Would someone who has good judgment, experience, and the time to look over this essay for me? </p>

<p>Feedback, suggestions, etc. =]</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>Bump . . . . . ..</p>

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<p>I'll look at it id you'd like. Have some experience with the UC essays. If you think I can help, shoot a PM at me.</p>

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<p>Sure thing, I'd be glad to take a look. PM me :)</p>

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<p>sure, if you will pm it fine</p>

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<p>I'll critique for you.</p>

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<p>sure ill critique, pm it over</p>

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<p>i'll seek for any spot to critique</p>

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<p>I'll try to help, too. (:
It might take me a day or two though.
PM me. :)</p>

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<p>sure, you can pm me..im a pretty good editor</p>

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<p>Sure!!
I would love to read it and give you some critiques/suggestions on it.
PM your essay to me and I would take a look over it.
=]</p>

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<p>I try to give you good feedback, PM it to me. =]</p>

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<p>sure pm it to me, i'll be glad to give you feedback on it. =)</p>

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<p>I'll give you some feedback too, PM it to me. =)</p>

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<p>PM to me! I wouldnt mind giving you feedback!</p>

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<p>I'll take a look, PM it to me.</p>

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<p>Pm me, I'll look over it. =)</p>

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<p>If you don't think you've got enough readers already, just give me a PM too.</p>

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<p>i'd love to help, pm me</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it.
People tell me I provide good and honest commentary.
Email me at: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>