UC first draft essay -- need revisions fast

<p>I just got done with my second UC Essay and need serious revisions.
I need someone to give me quick feedbacks.
Please help.</p>

<p>porque no?
pm prease</p>

<p>Hey i’d be glad to help me to if you’d like. Maybe you can help me with mine too? LOL u don’t have to</p>

<p>Por favor let me read it, thanks.</p>

<p>Sure i can help if you need</p>

<p>I can offer feedback. PM it over</p>

<p>Send me a PM</p>

<p>send me a pm and ill be sure to do it</p>

<p>send me a pm:) ill check it out</p>