UC personal statement critique

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<p>Anyone out there wanna read/edit my personal statement. Post here and Ill send you a copy.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

[dh999]

<p>I will read. </p>

<p>I think you were one of the people that read my first draft.So I will return the favor</p>

[superlyduper]

<p>i'll read it</p>

[yaomaama]

<p>i can take a look</p>

[supermang]

<p>I'll have a look and send you a critque :)</p>

[chochocho]

<p>If you want me to, I will.</p>

[Armani]

<p>i will, PM me</p>

[suffi12345]

<p>i can check it out, pm me... only 7 days till the deadline</p>

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<p>Any comments from those that read it?</p>

[beastmaster]

<p>I'll read it.</p>

[bresdude]

<p>i'll read it too</p>