UC Personal Statement Feedback needed!

College Essays
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<p>hey guys, can anyone read my 3 UC essays, preferably past/current UC students.</p>

<p>also, for feedback, can you guys not hold back. tell me what you think i should change.</p>

<p>thanks a lot. :)</p>

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<p>i'll read it.</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>I'll read it, feel free to message it to me.</p>

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<p>i'll read
pm me</p>

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<p>i'd be happy to help, pm me</p>

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<p>if you still want people to read it feel free to pm me.</p>

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<p>i'd like to read it!
PM~~</p>

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<p>sure pm me</p>

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<p>i can read it...pm me</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>i can help u..</p>

<p>PM me=]</p>

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<p>I'll read! : )</p>

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<p>I'll read, current Yalie here.</p>

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<p>I'm an applicant to UC. If you want Pm me</p>

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<p>I'm applying to UCs, as well. I'll take a look if you want. PM me.</p>

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<p>same boat...pm me!!:D</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>