UC personal statement - help evaluate please

College Essays
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<p>can you read my UC personal statement and provide feedback please?</p>

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<p>yes, send it</p>

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<p>yeah sure, i will read it</p>

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<p>Umichigan: sent the 3 responses (academic prep, potential to contribute and open-ended qn) via PM. these 3 are draft and your reviews/comments appreciated!</p>

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<p>sweetdream: sent the 3 responses (academic prep, potential to contribute and open-ended qn) via email. these 3 are draft and your reviews/comments appreciated!</p>

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<p>ill read it, you can email it to me at <a href="mailto:yoonex@gmail.com">yoonex@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>pm me if you want some criticism</p>

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<p>pm me if you want some editing help and criticism</p>

<p>or email me, watever</p>

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<p>Ill read it if you want</p>

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<p>I'll read it, pm me.</p>

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<p>Me too. PM me</p>

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<p>pm me...maybe we can swap essays</p>

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<p>ill read it, pm please</p>

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<p>I'll it and provide criticism if you would like.</p>

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<p>pm it over</p>

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<p>i'll read it, too</p>