<p>Please send me a message if you're willing to help critic my personal statement. I need as much constructive criticism as I can get! Thanks</p>
<p>PM it to me and I’ll see what I can do :)</p>
<p>Lilly9- I just found out that I am not allowed to PM since I am new to this website and I haven’t posted enough. Would it be alright if I emailed it to you?</p>
<p>I sent you a PM, but you can email it to me.</p>
<p>Edit: Just saw that you already did email it to me :p</p>
<p>Yeah! laurelarroyo at yahoo . com</p>
<p>I sent back my thoughts on your essay. Good job.</p>
<p>I emailed you back. Overall, good!</p>