UC Personal Statement prompt #1

College Essays
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<p>Can someone read and critique my personal statement for the UC prompt #1:</p>

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>I'll PM it to you!</p>

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<p>bump</p>

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<p>Read for read?</p>

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<p>Just sent it to you! </p>

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<p>Hmm I didn’t get anything in my inbox. May wanna try sending it again(:</p>

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<p>PM me, i’d help</p>

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<p>PM mee</p>

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<p>I’m an English tutor, and I’d be happy to help.</p>

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<p>Bump</p>

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<p>PM me! I’ll critique yours if you look at mine too.</p>

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<p>sent it to all of you guys!</p>

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<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine. Thanks</p>

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<p>I’ll do it, if you read mine.</p>

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<p>bump</p>