UC Personal Statement review?

seventeenHOSHI · November 28, 2015, 6:20am

Can someone please review my essay for grammar error, and the overall topic?
Thank you I will PM

collegeGeezer · November 28, 2015, 7:56am

I’ll give it a read.

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