UC Personal Statement

<p>Anyone willing to read and critique my UC personal statement? Just post here and I'll PM you. :) Anyways, thanks for taking the time to read this at least!</p>

<p>Yes i will. I already finished my horrible one, so I have time.</p>

<p>Alrighty, thanks! ^^</p>

<p>I can tell you my thoughts on it!</p>

<p>i have almost done mine, i would like to read yours.Thanks</p>

<p>I’d be willing to read/critique your PS!</p>

<p>I will!
(Also, I’m not going to rip you off. I’m applying to the UCs, too, and currently writing my essays, but I would never rip anyone off. I am, however, interested in getting a sense for the appropriate tone and format, which is why I’m trying to read other peoples’ essays and see what strikes me as good/bad… and I’ll tell you what I think!)</p>

<p>i’d like to read it.</p>

<p>AWesome. :)</p>

<p>I can read if you’d like</p>

<p>Anyone else interested in critiquing my personal statement? :)</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it</p>

<p>Yes, I will if you do the same for me.</p>

<p>I’ll read yours regardless but I’d be so kind of you to read and critique mine too bad pm me your essay</p>

<p>I’ll read it and hope that you can read mine :)</p>