UC Personal Statement

<p>So for the first prompt ( describe the world you come from) , I'm writing about how my world restricted my creativity.. do you guys think that it's a good topic? cuz I showed it to my counselor and she said it's too provocative and may be controversial. Anyone want to read it and critique it?</p>

<p>I can help ;p</p>

<p>i can help
PM me</p>

<p>Sure, College freshman.</p>

<p>Sure, send away!</p>

<p>@wpsl5683‌ thank you sooooo much! I just submitted my app and I think my essay is perfect (:</p>