<p>Alright, I've revised the first prompt essay again and again and practically am on my fifth draft which is hopefully the last draft before my final essay that I'll submit. I want some feedback but take note that I won't overhaul the whole thing for something new or do too much rephrasing.</p>
<p>Before I'll let people read my essay for the second prompt, is it okay to be really unconventional and not talk about a recent experience or volunteer work or hobbies? (I did that before for the 2nd prompt but I found the essay to be lacking 'feelings' and wrote a new essay, but I'm slightly afraid that the new essay is walking on a thin line between originality and wackiness)</p>
<p>Sooo..main question: can anyone please read it?</p>
<p>P.S. Can we give our essays titles? Or is it best without?</p>