UC Personal Statements - Help wanted!

College Essays
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<p>Hi, it may seem that I'm quite new to CC (low post count), but I am actually a regular user of CC, I just decided to create an account now since I'm applying to college and needed some help on my UC personal statements. I was just wondering if anybody could take a look at my essays and correct any problems and/or give me some suggestions. If you are interested, please post your email and I will send you the essays shortly. Thanks!</p>

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<p>j.ramos3527@**********</p>

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<p>What’s the email provider?</p>

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<p>gmail, sorry, cc did that.</p>

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<p>^ Sent. Thanks for taking your time to read my essay!</p>

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<p>No problem!</p>

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<p>Anybody else willing to read my essay?</p>

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<p>i will email me! laurelarroyo @ yahoo . com</p>

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<p>^ I sent you my personal statements.</p>