UC Personal Statements Need help please!

<p>Hello, looking for some readers for my UC personal statement #1, I think my essay may be too cliche and really need some help, I will PM you my PS if you post here, thank you all very much. Looking forward to some responses! </p>

<p>Thanks again!</p>

<p>Please help, really need to fix my cruddy essay. :[</p>

<p>I’ll look at it.</p>

<p>Thanks a lot rualum, I have sent you a pm</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it if you like.</p>

<p>Thank you APTester I have sent you a PM!</p>

<p>Hi if anybody can look at my essay it is very appreciated please post!</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>@noratoledo: Wow. 9 posts from 10:47 to 11:15 in multiple forums, all saying the same thing. I guess the graduate program isn’t working out too well if you have to be a shill for essay services (unless, of course, they are your services). If that’s the case, I suggest that you fire your marketing director.</p>